
The March Slice of Life Challenge is hosted by Stacey and Ruth at Two Writing Teachers

It is snowing when I arrive at school for an evening meeting - nickel sized snowflakes swirl and twirl in the air, festive and lovely. They form a delicate lacy carpet across the asphalt, but I am not fooled by their loveliness ..I have heard the forecast, and it is grim.
Meeting over, I head through the long corridor to the parking lot. I step out into winter's white fury - a roaring lion of a March storm. There is a car ahead of me, moving more quickly than I. It swerves and swishes, narrowly missing street signs as it makes its turns. Slow down, I think, please slow down! It is snowing too hard for the windshield wipers to keep up - a steady curtain of snow falls thick and fast. The glow of headlights and tail lights, darting here and streaming by there, is mesmerizing - flashes of gold and amber and scarlet in the midst of winter white.
The van swoops down the last but one hill home, and I can see the little tunnel we must pass through - a gaping blackness. We emerge and I make it through the last intersection, just as a snow plow charges by, throwing a downy blanket across the expanse of my windscreen. I drive by instinct, knowing that the road is straight at this point, while the wipers work valiantly to clear the view.
At last, I reach the bottom of the last hill home. Steady there, I tell myself, stay steady and straight.You can do this. I count the streetlights as we pass by - there are seven in all, the seventh being at our corner. I am so glad to make that last turn, the turn home, that I take it too quickly. I feel the back end of the van spin out and fan across our street. Go with the skid, don't fight it, I remind myself. Slowly, the van comes to a halt and I creep into our driveway.
My husband is at the window...I am home.
Phew! So glad you made it! I felt terrified for you! Hope you have a snow day and don't have to drive today!
ReplyDeleteWow, Tara, I've been there counting streetlights in the past-so scary. You described this beautifully. I'm glad you made it safely. Will you have a snow day today! We still can have that kind of weather too, but because we're in such a drought situation, it's unlikely. Sorry for the anxiety!
ReplyDeleteExcellent writing...I was with your the whole time...in the passenger seat...gripping the arm of the seat. Your descriptions were beautiful...your words taking us on a what is usually a simple drive that turns into an adventure. I liked the end...where your husband was at the window. I am sure he was as glad as you were that you were home. Jackie http://familytrove.blogspot.com/
ReplyDeleteI was with you all the way Tara! Nervous, unsure, scared and holding on for dear life! Beautiful descriptions. I'm tired of this weather. It's a freezing 8 degrees here near Chicago today with quite the windchill. Where is spring? I hope for your sake and mine, it's coming soon!
ReplyDeleteTara, this slice petrified me. I detest driving in snowy conditions, and thank goodness, I don't have to very often in the Northwest. I love your description of the snowflakes - "nickel sized snowflakes swirl and twirl in the air, festive and lovely." Great use of italics to show your inner thinking. May I share this slice with my students?
ReplyDeleteI was with you all of the way. I could feel your sense of relief when you arrived at home, your husband standing in the window.
ReplyDeletePowerful descriptions put me right next to you in the van. I was afraid to get to the end, worried that someone else didn't travel slowly. I breathed a sigh as you pulled in safely. This was gripping. I hope you had a snow day.
ReplyDeleteI agree with others- this was very descriptive and ugh, I really felt like I was there. Which I hated because this is one of the things that scares me most that I actually have to deal with in real life! Doesn't that mean you did an excellent job as a writer?!
ReplyDeleteWhat a thrilling ride that could be part of a larger story. I've been there and can feel your anxieties. I tell myself all the time when things get rough, "I can do this." It helps to steady oneself. Yes, March is still here and with all its teasing. Hope this was your last snowfall for the year. Ours was last week.
ReplyDeleteI read this piece with both eyes...one for the Tara I know...freaking out with you... and for the Tara who writes a great story and with both eyes I'm at the edge of my seat...
ReplyDeleteBRAVO friend. Enjoy your vacation...